Jo and the theme park

This is my story of Jo and the theme park.

There once was lived a  happy boy and he went to a theme park. With his family then he went to celebrate his birthday then Jo picked  witch rollercoaster  he wanted to go on then he  

looked around then he saw a pirate rollercoaster ride then  he went to look around so he could ask if he could go on the ride but

when he looked behind kaboom no one was there completely no

one now Jo’s family  now was Jolly and then Joe got frightened’ scared Jo did not even know what to do also Jo was a geek he had brown  hair and was frightened of dark Then

Jo heard a voice it said you're alright its okay Jo nearly wet his pants who who said that said Jo  in tiny corner feeling horribly frightened it was me said the voice me hi Im billy then come said

 Jo shaky noThen the voice came closer saying listen !You're not alone !Its ok just come closer but Joe did not want to come then  the voice said  

  

again  If you don’t come I’m gonna come to you and you might not want me to come out Jo was still too shaky to come so the voice came and when Jo looked it was just a cardboard.

now Joe was so confused that he said hu then the box said I said come open me up! Okay Just stop shouting actually

do you yes oh okay so you can fly now I know you're a bird no so was I close no not at all okay then Jo went to

Open the brown yellow old box but before he could wame he got suked in the hole where his faimly last standed then when he found himself he was in this ship and his family was there so he tried to get to get his family but their seat belts where metal and attached to some electronic device but the Jo. looked and saw that the device was right next to him so he wrecked the device got him out

then he went to his family to get them out but then he heard footsteps coming closer so he hid between the  huge green gloomy cupboards then the footsteps were in the room and he he heard people saying he is gone you egg but I thought I told you to keep and eye on them disgusting now I have to find him  I might even

have to fire you disgusting runt then one said their very hard  then befor he knew it he was drowning in sinking sand oh no this can't be the end of my life but it was and befor Jo knew it he had sank to the bottom with his family.