Super sentences week 7

We have been doing super sentences we have been learning how to make our sentences better using different VOCAB and other things.

1. WALT write super sentences.

There are 7 different ways to write super sentences!                                

1. Add in words
2. Drop in chunks of information
3. Add on at the end
4. Add on at the beginning
5. Change words
6. Add a simile
7. Alliterate

In pairs change this sentence in the seven different ways, stick to one way for each new sentence.

The boy ran down to the river.

1. The quick chubby boy ran down the river cheerfully.
2. The hungry boy ran down to the shiny water.
3. The boy ran down to the river thinking he could find something for his supper
4. As the sun rises, the cheerful young boy ran to the light blue river
5. Blue the content little boy skipped down to the river.
6. The little hungry boy jumped and thumped around like a elephant.  
7. The big bulky boy ran  down to the rippling river to meet his freaky friends.

The child walked to school (Hulita)

The joyfully hungry teenager walked hastily to get a application to work at  Burger King from school like a jaguar running to save their crazy crunchy kids.

The ugly bragger jumped like a kangaroo all the way down to the city to get a fishy friend to enjoy his cheerfully day hoping his wife wouldn’t leave him.        

The toddler skipped as fast as a ferocious fox because she was so happy to be going to preschool for the first  time.   

 

The child walked to school (Lorna)

The  hungry happy teenager ran  as fast as a tiger all the way down to the slippery slope to get an application for  mechanical work though still hopping his wife would not dump him.

The crazy college  student  hopped like a kangaroo all the way down the city cobblestones to get supper for his freaky family still hoping his wife would not be mad at him and leave him.  

As the sun flew up into the sky the sleepy schoolgirl followed the slimy snail trace that led into her secret  school as she walked to school she made sure that she was as quiet.