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Friday 12 September 2014

Poetry

I have  made a new poem today hope you enjoy it.


Happiness
Happiness looks like little bright colours as bright as the shining lights at night.
Happiness taste delicious and smells like flavoured delicious sprinkles.It looks great and it looks  like a wonderful time. It is as fun as a merry go round
Happiness feels wonderful and feels sparkling also  feels like hanging out with your family. It smells sweet and like strawberries and it smells like  many other wonderful things.
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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous22 September 2014 at 11:42

    Hi,Lorna
    WOW! I really like your work and the adjective that you used in your work.
    Keep up the hard work.
    By:Jasman

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  2. Anonymous13 October 2014 at 10:56

    thankyou, Jasman

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