Week 9 poetry

WALT: We are learning to use descriptive language to create a picture in the reader’s head. Brainstorm using the padlet (password is home) ideas about ‘where you are from’ using the five senses: look, feel, smell, taste and hear. Write your poem here: Blooming trees big bees plants surrounding safe and sound wind flowing trees blowing warm blankets all around rocks near islands big fig trees little warm bees and that is where I'm from. This poem means a lot to me and this explains where I am from and what it is like there and I am very proud of where I live this poem is a very exiting poem.

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Today I am posting my diamante poem. enjoy.

Kittens

fluffy,cute,pretty

hissing,scratching,playing,roaming

sneaky,fresh ,soft kittens

golden little meow

magnificent,delicate

face,shining,above

and that is the end

Poetry

I have  made a new poem today hope you enjoy it.

Happiness

Happiness looks like little bright colours as bright as the shining lights at night.

Happiness taste delicious and smells like flavoured delicious sprinkles.It looks great and it looks  like a wonderful time. It is as fun as a merry go round

Happiness feels wonderful and feels sparkling also  feels like hanging out with your family. It smells sweet and like strawberries and it smells like  many other wonderful things.

Poetry

In Flox class we have been doing Poetry in writing. Here is one of my favourite poems hope you enjoy  now this poem is going to be a free verse poem now they call it a free verse poem because it is easy to make up  the decisions like if it rhymes or if it doesn't. 

   The dark blue waves

It was a dark night crash,boom,bang the waves went           

The waves were as big as a bouncy castle

It was dark,gloomy and haunted  
The waves were as loud as a haunted  house 
Swirl went the huge mighty waves

The sky was dark and it was as quiet as a haunted cloud

The rest of the sky was striped as a large mummy tiger  That is how that scary frightful night ended.