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Thursday, 26 November 2015

WALT use precise nouns to add detail for our reader.


This week in writing we have been using precise nouns to make our writing more specific for the reader.

We took a paragraph and changed the nouns from general nouns to precise nouns.

Here is an example.

In the weekend I had to do lots of shopping with my Mum. We went to the shop supermarket to get some food Caramel Chocolate. We also went to look for a present golden teddy bear for my cousin’s birthday. I had to choose between a doll Barbie and a soft toy little bunny . After that we went to the shop to buy some clothes, I got two new items tank tops  and a pair of shoes Nikey shoes. Because I had been so good, mum took me to the shop to buy an ice block rocky road. Lucky me!

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