This week in writing we have been using precise nouns to make our writing more specific for the reader.
We took a paragraph and changed the nouns from general nouns to precise nouns.
Here is an example.
In the weekend I had to do lots of shopping with my Mum. We went to the shop supermarket to get some food Caramel Chocolate. We also went to look for a present golden teddy bear for my cousin’s birthday. I had to choose between a doll Barbie and a soft toy little bunny . After that we went to the shop to buy some clothes, I got two new items tank tops and a pair of shoes Nikey shoes. Because I had been so good, mum took me to the shop to buy an ice block rocky road. Lucky me!
We took a paragraph and changed the nouns from general nouns to precise nouns.
Here is an example.
In the weekend I had to do lots of shopping with my Mum. We went to the
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